Its like.
I wasnt sure untill just now, the education system in ny has definitely went downhill since i went to school. Mind you im not saying your an idiot. Im saying that you simply lack the ability to understand what most words mean, or how a metaphor is supposed to be structured. "Make sense like stock tips" Did you mean "Make cents like stock tips" as to point toward the overall economic downturn of the practical stock exchange? Perhaps the quality of stock advice worth in todays market? Either way, its not a fuckin metaphor thats properly structured, nor is it applicable to the following sentence of "literaly ya fall fits
dipshits into piss". WHAT THE FUCK DOES THAT MEAN?
On the plus side, your flow, although weak and unmelodic, is getting slowly stronger. Lyrics are still your weakest point, as at certain intervals it drops into "im just looking for something that rhymes with what i last said caus i think its too good to erase."
Anyway, keep up the promotion of my name baby gurl. Ill try and wash my sack so it taste fresh for you tonight baby.